I really enjoyed your Twine story on the domination of an evil dragon. It is well thought out and follows the segmenting principle very nicely because users can spend as much time as they need on each page and can explore at their own pace. Your story would also be very helpful for people who are new users of Twine. It is a great example for how to use Twine and to demonstrate how storytelling can be an effective method of learning.
I also like how you incorporated the coherency principle in your blog post by focusing on one topic per paragraph. This way, the reader can focus on specific information which increases the ability to process and retain information.
It is clear to me that you know how to use Mayer’s multimedia principles to make an effective Twine story and an organized blog post. I wonder if incorporating signaling principles such as bolding or underlining important words or information would be helpful so readers can direct their attention even more.
All and all, I enjoyed reading through your blog post and your Twine story. Great Job!
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